mono black Discard

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// Deck file for Magic Workstation (http://www.magicworkstation.com)
// NAME : deck defausse
// CREATOR : kropernic (magic-ville.com)
// FORMAT : Standard
24 [UNH] Swamp
3 [] Nantuko Shade
3 [WWK] Pilgrim's Eye
4 [ZEN] Gatekeeper of Malakir
2 [] Liliana Vess
4 [] Liliana's Caress
4 [M10] Tendrils of Corruption
4 [] Duress
4 [ROE] Inquisition of Kozilek
4 [] Mind Rot
4 [] Sign in Blood
SB: 1 [ROE] Kozilek, Butcher of Truth
SB: 2 [ZEN] Sadistic Sacrament
SB: 4 [] Leyline of the Void
SB: 4 [ROE] Consuming Vapors
SB: 4 [] Black Knight

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// Deck file for Magic Workstation (http://www.magicworkstation.com)
// NAME : deck defausse
// CREATOR : kropernic (magic-ville.com)
// FORMAT : Standard
24 [UNH] Swamp
3 [] Nantuko Shade
4 [ZEN] Gatekeeper of Malakir
2 [] Liliana Vess
3 [WWK] Quest for the Nihil Stone
4 [] Liliana's Caress
4 [M10] Tendrils of Corruption
4 [] Duress
4 [ROE] Inquisition of Kozilek
4 [] Mind Rot
4 [] Sign in Blood
SB: 1 [ROE] Kozilek, Butcher of Truth
SB: 2 [ZEN] Sadistic Sacrament
SB: 4 [] Leyline of the Void
SB: 4 [ROE] Consuming Vapors
SB: 4 [] Black Knight